Writing Challenge: Build a Better Sentence

I like writing and I like crafting words. Unfortunately, this takes practice, and practice is not always fun. Sometimes it’s downright tedious.

But not today!

I’m throwing out a sentence that I posted on this blog in the past week. Not a sentence I think is particularly great, just a sentence. And your job, should you choose to accept the challenge, is to build a better sentence in the comment section.

You can add drama. You can add humor. You can delete all adjectives and adverbs. You can add superfluous language. Whatever you want. Change one word, change all the words, or anywhere in between.

Ready?

Seafood has always been a bit intimidating to me.

Go!

Advertisements

About Sarah

I love being wife to my sweetie, mama and teacher to my three wonderful children, and friend to people near and far. I love to express myself through words. I blog to connect with others and so that someday, hopefully, my kiddos will understand who their mama was...way back when.
This entry was posted in Build a Sentence, Random, writing and tagged . Bookmark the permalink.

8 Responses to Writing Challenge: Build a Better Sentence

  1. Mom says:

    Intimidating? Me? The food I sea I bit! :~

  2. Mom says:

    Intimidating? To Me? The food I sea I bit!
    Intimidating? To Me? The food I sea I bit, and it has been!
    Aw, well – – – – –

  3. Sarah says:

    Very nice, Mandy. I like that one a lot.

  4. Pingback: Writing Challenge: Provide the Context « My Peace and Joy

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s